Thursday, December 28, 2006

The profit side of writing

The big question that comes up with writers is “how do I make money”? In the next few days I’ll be covering some ways you can turn your words into cash.

#1. Ghostwriting- The ghostwriting market is huge. People in virtually every industry and from every background have a need for ghostwriters. As a ghost writer you can write anything from articles for business leaders to speeches for political candidates.
What you’ll need to do first is create a portfolio of your writing samples to show prospective clients. The ghostwriting service is inexpensive to start all you really need is a computer, printer and internet services


I suggest picking up Essential guide to ghostwriting. It gives scads of secrets on how to make it in this type of business. I would not recommend plunging into the ghost writing world without it.
Here are just a few of the things you will learn.

  • The one crucial skill that every successful ghostwriter must have (Page 5)
  • The 12 items on the 'wish list' for the well-equipped ghostwriter - some of them may surprise you! (Pages 6 - 8)
  • The SIX THINGS that all clients want - get these things in place and you will have clients queued up waiting! (Page 9)

Find out more information about the Essential guide to ghostwriting by clicking here.

#2 Write your own e-book-A negative drawback to being a ghostwriter is that you don’t get credit for your own work, this why many writers rave over e-books. You can write about practically anything and sell your book. E-books allow you to create an extremely high profit margin. There are no delivery cost and you can make money on autopilot 24 hours a day seven days a week.

How do you get started? Easy…pick up a copy of How to write and publish your own e-book…in as little as 7 days. Jim Edwards and Joe Vitale are experts and they will guide you through the process with ease. This book is a must have for anyone looking to create a passive income through writing.

You will discover

  • The "right" way to publish your ebook so virtually everyone connected to the Internet can buy it and read it. (page 48)
  • 3 *Proven* methods for turning out a highly profitable ebook in record time... even if you have no idea what to write about. (page 65)
  • A step-by-step explanation of how one author sold $15,561.49 worth of ebooks in less than a week. (page 108)
  • Plus so much more

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#3- Online Writing: There are websites that allow you create content and still keep your name such as Triond. This is great way to establish yourself as a writer online. However, the numbers are small. The best way to make some real money with this is to write fast. 30min article is instrumental to your success with this business form. My suggestion is write an online novel. This way you don’t have to spend hours doing research or waiting for inspiration.

With the writing business the key to success is to write often. There really isn’t any other secret. You have to write more to make more.

Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Keep Your Articles Free of Fillers

Fillers are always a bad idea. If your fact or sentence does not support your topic sentence it shouldn’t be included in the paragraph, just as a paragraph belongs in an essay only if it supports your argument or purpose. Do not add phrases in your article just so you make your work longer. It is often better to say a lot with a few words than nothing with a lot of words.

Many of us become a word count slaves. We feel the need to add as much as possible in an article so we can draw in more readers or because we think it is interesting information. Adding excess information does not help to develop your paragraphs. Ask yourself if what you are writing adds to the document as a whole, if it doesn’t cut it out. You will most likely be able to tell if you have an unnecessary addition to your piece once you begin proof reading.

Monday, December 18, 2006

Proof reading tips

Proofread your document for spelling mistakes by reading it outloud backward from the last word to the first, looking only at how each word is spelled.

Never accept a computer's spellcheckers suggestions uncritically. It may not distinguish homonyms such as whose and who's or there and their nor will it recognize a missing word.

Read your draft outloud, reading slowly to correct any missing words, repeated words or other typographical mistakes




Friday, December 15, 2006

Proof reading made easy

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I am a big advocate for knowing how to proof read your own work; however, it is time consuming and when your using articles to increase your income you need to save all the time you can.

I’m sure you have found yourself in a position where you have worked hard to produce a document that you wanted to share but you had no idea if it was correct. Perhaps you had an essay due that you finished the night before it was due and you don’t feel confident about handing it in because you are unsure of its correctness

I’ve been there and I can tell you the only thing worse than writer’s block is writing something brilliant that is loaded with mistakes.

What do you do when you find yourself in this predicament? Submit your work to an online editor. I’ve looked around for a really good online editor but a lot of them are expensive or unprofessional. After weeks of searching I found them: Scribendi!

Why choose Scribendi?

-Scriendi is fast- you can have your work edited in eight hours, some other places take days
-Scribendi is inexpensive- none of this “$100 for a page” B.S. that some places charge
- Scribendi offers many services- there are some good editing websites but some of them are strictly academic or business related. I don’t want to be bouncing around from one editor to another. With Scibendi I can submit articles I write for my business and essays for school, they even look over websites. It’s a one stop shop for all your proofreading needs.

You need to proof read your work and having an online proofreader will eliminate the stress of having to do it yourself. While your getting your work edited you can be working on your next piece.

Having a fresh pair of eyes look over your work can be very beneficial. It can turn a C paper into an A, be the difference between getting your book published and not getting it published or it can create a better response to your work thus boosting your sales.

Scribendi helps many people with their writing needs. Here are what some other people who have benefited from their services had to say.

Really pleased-It’s amazing how long you can stare at something and not be able to improve it! This is a great service which takes some of the sting out of agonizing over the query letter.”
Louise

My editor was really good at catching careless errors as well as making good suggestions in terms of phrasing
Erin

I recently won Honorable Mention for my short story, Narrow Paths, in the Writer’s Digest writing competition. I attribute my success to the help of scribendi.”
Lisa

The world is not forgiving to writing mistakes. You need every word of your documents to be correct and every sentence to flow. Writing with mistakes gives people the impression that you are careless, unprofessional, and even uneducated. People who can properly communicate themselves through writing go farther in life.

Proofreading is the key to your writing success. The editors at Scribendi are experts and I can guarantee you will be impressed with the help they can give you. Yes, there are others but like I said many of them over charge and they do not provide you with as many services as Scribendi. You have put a lot of work into your writing now let someone else let it give you the best results it can give.

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You never want to submit anything that hasn’t been checked; use Scribendi for all your proofreading and editing needs and you’ll see the difference your work can make.

Monday, December 11, 2006

What's with all the article hype?

You will probably come across a multitude of articles that will tell you that writing articles is one of the best ways to promote your business and get exposure and you know what…they’re right!

The internet is responsible for providing one of human’s greatest addictions…information.

When you were in school you had to write book reports, essays and do other projects to show your teachers that you understood the lessons and the information they provided, articles are the same way. You have to let your reader know you are an expert in your field. When you go to a car dealership a bank or even the supermarket you assume the people working there can give you information on what you need to know and that they understand the field they are in. Online, you don’t get to talk face to face to people to give them information they need so you write about it.
Article writing lets you prove that you are an expert in your field.

They also do something that ads and pitch pages don’t do, at least not off the bat…you’ll find out tomorrow what this is and why it’s so important.

Articles allow you to gain immediate respect. Unlike an ad when you know the company is out for your money, an article gives you information and we respect people who can give us insight, and knowledge about the things we want to know. It is much more difficult to establish trust online. Prospective customers are getting smarter and more cynical thus writing articles give you a chance to establish trust and boost a buyer’s faith. This increases the longevity of your business

If you take a look at commercials today, most of them sell information. They now tell you to ”visit the website for more information”, “ask your doctor for more information”, “call for a free brochure”. Why? Because they have caught on to peoples need to be further informed. They don’t say “buy this bed”, instead they tell you to go to their website and find out more. They know you are more likely to buy once you have gained more information. Articles should be a marketers best friend. You have the advantage of getting in front of thousands of people with your information and once you publish on the web it’s there forever . Three years from now someone will come across your article and regard you as an expert and want to do business with you.

Ads get peoples attention. Articles get peoples respect. I suggest using both to market but a good quality article will benefit you longer.



Thursday, December 07, 2006

A Procrastinator's Dream Come True: The 30 min Article System

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Ask yourself how long it takes you to write your articles, 1 hour, 2 hours maybe even a few days. How would you like to finish your articles in 30min? I was skeptical at first but it is possible and anyone can do it.

This system is brought to you by Melanie Mendelson. What I love about it is it’s not just a book that you read and apply the techniques; it is an action based step by step system that will get an article out of you in 30 min or less.

30 min article writing system helps to

  • Churn out more articles in less time
  • Get your papers in on time
  • Eliminate the frustration you feel about writing articles
  • Get your articles published.

2 hours didn’t seem that long to me until I wrote my first article in 30 min then I thought "2 hours-what took me so long"! Time is money; this is a well known fact. If you’re starting a home business or if you already have one, writing articles is a great way to promote your business. Well, if you’re taking hours to complete those articles your losing money.

Do the math:
-Just 30 minutes per week = 1 article per week = 52 articles per year-2 hours per week = 4 articles per week = 208 articles per year

I don’t like math so let me explain it to you in non math terms:

More articles=more exposure=more money!

I know it sounds too good to be true but it really does work. Here’s what some other believers had to say

"Melanie, Your system is OUTRAGEOUS and UNFAIR.Unfair to all of us who struggled for years doing it the "hard way."But seriously Melanie, you've taken a very powerful concept and cleverly presented it so even a novice can produce profitable, quality articles in 30 minutes or less. Honestly, if I hadn't experienced it myself - I'd have never believed you.Following your system allowed me to produce nearly 3 times as much content as I did before...and when you get paid to produce this is a VERY GOOD (and profitable) THING!Nicely done!" James Burchillhttp://ElanceExposed.com

"Now where was Melanie during my stint in Journalism school? I would have had every article in ahead of time instead of at the wire!Your tips on writing snappy "how to" articles are easy to understand and even easier to implement with the help of a great program tool. Thanks Melanie, you've just made my article writing goal for 2006 more simple!" Natasha Vincenthttp://www.mydreadlocks.com

"Melanie,You’ve really done a wonderful thing here. I was freed from agonizing, torturous times that occurred every time I even THOUGHT about the fact that I needed to write an article for my blog.I got your program because I needed to write an article that weekend. It usually takes me several hours at least and I agonize over it for several hours before getting started.So I downloaded your material, saw that there was a guide and a program and ran the program first without reading the guide. 30 minutes later I had my first article produced with your system.I couldn’t believe it… I told my wife, my daughter and my son… My daughter’s in 10th grade and has to write lots of little article-like papers for school. My son loves to write anyway. My wife is responsible for the ‘Kingwood Garden Club’ newsletter. I could see how they could each benefit from understanding the process.If you decide to let others sell your system also, I’d certainly like to help.I have absolutely NOTHING NEGATIVE to say. I can only offer WOW! What a great product.Thanks again, Greg Whitehttp://www.blogmarketingtactics.blogspot.com

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"The "30 Minute Article Writing System" is the answer to the writer's curse of perfectionism. No more putting it off until it sounds just right.Melanie's system guides you clearly and concisely through a simple ten-step process. The accompanying audio program prompts are invaluable. It's just the right amount of pressure to get the job done but not so much that you run screaming from your keyboard!I'm looking forward to pumping out some great articles with my newfound guide." Jenny Dunham http://www.JennyEvansDunham.com

"Melanie, you have done a great job! I really like your new product.I opened the manual, read it and then started the audio program. Within 30 minutes I had written a brilliant article ready for submission to directories.Your concept is very helpful. I often have writers block but with your article program I won't anymore! You outline everything in detail so I will be using it for many times over again! Thanks for a great product." Chris Geldof http://www.articlecube.com

"The 30 Minutes Article System addresses the subject of "Article Writing" with such ease that it makes you think that "Article Writing" is for the dummies. It clearly illustrates how and where to start, how and where to end and how and what to do in-between.The system tickles the brain-cells in the right places, at the right time and in the right sequence and the by-product is a well written article which can drive your business to greater heights. The 30 minute article system comes as a whiff of fresh air and very different from the ebooks floating around which give you a lot of information but at the end of it all...you are left where you started. Not so...with the 30 Minute Article Writing System. The system takes you by hand and shows how to create an article in record time - 30 minutes flat. Jayadeep Rathhttp://www.EatSleepTraffic.com

Hi Melanie,This product is a necessity for someone like me who doesn't like to write articles. It gives you step by step information and tools to help you work faster.Now, my articles look professional, I get them done in less than 30 minutes, and I don't have to rack my brain over what to write next.This product is amazing and I will definitely use it over and over again.Good Success!" Vondre' T. Whaleyhttp://www.scoopmembers.com

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It helped me get the same amount of stuff written in 30 minutes that would normally take me 2 or 3 hours. I think it's a great product and one I look forward to using again.
Thanks so much and best of luck!"
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Writing efficiently is just as important as writing effectivley. Majority of people have to write on a deadline. If it’s taking you hours to finish your articles and essays you need this system and your business deserves it. You can make all the excuses I made. “2 hours isn’t that bad” “I work at my own pace” “I don’t need that kind of pressure” But I guarantee that you will be losing money and in the end you will be running to get this system. Save yourself the hassle and get 30 min article writing system now!

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Thursday, October 12, 2006

Review of "Easy Writing: A Practical Guide for Business Professionals" By George Kirazian

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I used to spend hours working on my reports and articles, but I was not getting the desired results. It was doing a number on my confidence whether I wanted to admit it or not. If this sounds remotely familiar, you’re probably doing what I used to, your working hard not smart, but no worries this can be remedied with Easy Writing by George Kirazian. It's a great book that does exactly what its name says. It makes writing easy for ANY writing purpose!

Easy Writing will help you to:

  • Write clear, correct sentences, without worrying if they are clear and correct
  • Create well structured paragraphs that will present and expand your ideas effectively
  • Structure and develop the longer forms: reports, booklets--yes, even books--with new confidence and control

Now, am I a writing guru? Well, I don’t have a best selling novel…yet, but I do know methods that effectively improve your writing thus saving you time and this is exactly what Easy Writing does. Whether it’s for my English papers or my home business, I need to be clear, confident, and professional. These are key elements to ensure success in any field, and the skills to get these characteristics in your writing are found in Easy Writing.

George Kirazian, the author of this helpful tool, has 30 plus years of experience that are guaranteed to benefit anyone—business professionals, students, home business owners, even people who have not written a paragraph in ages. I consider myself to be a good writer but George really knows his stuff. I am not the only one who thinks so here are what some other REAL people said about Easy Writing:


"For the first time I'm confident about my writing. Now I don't stare at a blank page for an hour before I start.... I'm even getting compliments!!" E. Molinari, NY, NY

"If only I knew that improving my writing skills was this easy, I would have done it years ago!" Ron C., Los Angeles, CA

"Everything you need to write effectively, whether for business, college, or personal use, can be found in this book. It makes writing fun again! I've found "Easy Writing" to be a valuable resource in my profession. Forget all those abstract English diagrams---this book clarifies and, through easily understood examples, shows how to write the right way!"
Richard S. Stowell, El Cajon, CA

"I was blown away by how simple these techniques are and how quickly they helped me improve my writing! I'm a believer now!" JP Davies, San Diego, CA

"I can't believe it! I'm writing reports, and I actually know what I'm doing! Thanks, George!" P. Sebastian, Jersey City, NJ


"Semicolon? I never even used one before!! George, your techniques are simple and easy to learn!!! My neighbor's happy, too. I don't have to ask her to check my writing anymore. It's a great feeling!!!" R. Pulver, Providence, RI

"Your book is very easy to understand because it has simplified all the techniques and grammatical rules that used to scare me from writing during my school days...."
A. Afolabi, Lagos, Nigeria

I’ve tried other books; some were not so bad, others were a waste of money. Easy Writing makes it on my list of "top essential books for writers" because it works. Even if you are an accomplished writer you will learn how to better harness your skills. People will take you seriously and will want to do business with you.

I hope you found this invaluable advice to be helpful. You don’t have to take my word for it or anyone else’s for that matter. There are a multitude of books out there that claim to improve your writing. However, most of them are a collection of grammatical rules that do not work. I know because I’ve tried some of them; I wasted my time and my money. You can learn to work smart with Easy Writing and start reaping the benefits or you can continue doing what you’re doing now. Choosing the latter is the fastest way to lose customers, business credibility and you will not see those grades increase either, because if you write with mistakes you will not be seen as someone who has taken the time to get things done right.

As George says, "knowing how to write is vital to your success in life". Grab a copy of Easy Writing by George Kirazian and learn essential skills that you will benefit from for a lifetime!

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Here’s to your success
Easy Writing

Just a little note for the day:
Your words are a reflection of your self; make sure they do you justice.

Friday, October 13, 2006

If it wasn’t enough that you get a great book, George himself answers any e-mail questions you have about writing, free of charge! My own teachers didn’t do that. This is a great bonus that you should definitely take advantage of.

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Always remember to warm up all the parts of your body before putting it to work. This includes your brain. I'll elaborate next day.

Prewriting

Remember what I said about warming up? Well, George explains it much better in his book, but writing down the whole chapter would take too long. Instead I’m going to just sum it up for you.

Consider your brain as a muscle. It needs to be warmed up just like any other muscle. Good writing begins with pre-writing. Here are a couple passages from his book explaining this.

So, what's the warm-up for writing? Simple: sit down and start writing. Don't worry about the subject. Just do some free writing, some brainstorming, as you did with your spiral notebook practice sentences back in Part I. Write about your spouse, your sister, your car, your lover(s), last week-end's picnic. It doesn't matter. Just ease into the writing, slowly warm-up the thought muscles. Do it for, say, four or five minutes. You just want to establish some rapport between hand and paper (or key-board).

This is free writing, one of the most effective ways to tune-in your thoughts and slowly work up to your subject or topic. Sadly, most people don't even think of doing this; as we said, they just want to get the writing done as soon as possible.

If you do nothing else, I urge you to at least take this advice. Free-writing will help you to determine

-What you already know or think about a topic

-Which aspects of the topic interest you most

-What facts you need to learn in order to further expand your analysis

Do not worry about grammar or neatness, after all this is just a warm up. Once you’ve done this for a bit, move into the next phase, start zoning in on your topic.

You’re brain is now fired up and ready to work!

Keep coming back for more. After all, we're just getting warmed up =)

Choosing a topic

Choosing a topic can be very daunting. Often, too much focus goes into deciding on the right topic. Rather than deciding on whether or not it’s a "good" topic, decide on if it’s a good topic for you. Your topic should excite and interest you. This will make it easier to keep your readers interested. Narrowing your topic down and giving it a focus will make writing less overwhelming. This is especially helpful if it’s an assigned topic that you’re not crazy about. Find something about it that sparks your interest; continue to break it down until you have a smaller topic that you’re comfortable with.

Another trick that I commonly use to pick my topics is to go against the norm. It can be more challenging but writing from a different point of view will intrigue your readers. For instance, suppose your topic is about technology, let’s narrow it down to cell phones. You could write about the advantages to having a cell phone but writing about the disadvantages will make your piece seem more fascinating and it will actually be easier for you to get into. Taking the unappealing or unpopular side is often easier.

When I need to chop down my colossal sized topic I ask myself what exactly am I writing about.

Appeal to your Audience

You have your idea and you’ve narrowed it down to a focused topic. Great! Now all you have to do is write it…for your audience. Always keep them in mind when you’re writing. You have to consider your audiences prior knowledge, beliefs, values and age when writing because these will affect their responses to your piece. You should not assume that your audience shares your beliefs and values.
While an academic essay usually addresses an audience already familiar with the subject, a business report may circulate amongst numerous readers whose degree of familiarity with the topic varies. Best selling novelists always keep their audience in mind; they know their readers have certain expectations and they must meet them in order to make them happy.

I don’t just write for my reader; I take on the role. Assessing your work from the reader’s perspective helps to keep you focused.

Purpose

Once you have established what you are writing you need to decide why you are writing. Deciding on the purpose of your piece will affect your writing considerably. Your purpose will help you to better adapt to your audience. Ask yourself is my purpose to inform, stimulate debate, amuse, change their minds or persuade them to take action? If it is an assignment, consider the wording. The terms analyze, compare, contrast, demonstrate, and explain can help you to determine your writing purpose.
A great tip I learned for freelance writing is the 10 word purpose statement. You can apply this to a book or an article. Basically it’s a writer’s road map which looks like this:
The purpose of this (book/essay etc.)is to…your 10 words would follow. If you can’t sum your purpose in 10 words then you are still working out the idea and are not ready to write. It helps me to stay on track without making a formal outline.

I learned this from: http://www.aboutfreelancewriting.com/articles/gettingitdone/purpose.htm

An outline is helpful though, so I’ll show you a method you can use next time. For now remember to consider the three W’S: what, who and why when writing

Organizing your ideas

This is my least favorite part about writing, mostly because I can be such a scatter brain. Needless to say it is a crucial step to writing. After further thought and research, group related ideas into subtopics. If an idea or subtopic does not fit into your specific purpose or topic eliminate it. Use indentations or bullets to show relevant subordination underneath the broader ideas they support or illustrate.

Our first example will be one based on literature. Our topic will be the characterization of Beowulf in Beowulf.

Thesis: Beowulf is characterized as a hero not through realistic detail but through dramatic speeches, and exaggerated descriptions of his actions in battle

Dramatic speeches
1.Heroic bearing
- Reception by the guard at the coast
- Reception by Wulfgar

2.Heroic reputation
-Reception by Hrothgar

3.Beowulf’s boasts
-Reply to Hrothgar’s welcome
- Reply to Unferth’s

Exaggerated Description of Actions in Battle
1.Grendal
-Noise/Movement in the hall
- Grip feared by Grendal
-Dragon
-Desire to fight alone, even in old age
-Slays dragon but dies
-Hero funeral rites


Second Example: report/article

Topic: daycare availability in rural areas as opposed to cities

Thesis: Even though rural areas do not provide families with as much access with daycare facilities as do urban families, their informal arrangements meet their children’s need

I.Rural
-fewer families, smaller families, less formal employment than in cities

-Organized, institutionalized daycare not practical
-irregular hours
-lack of population density
-distances

-Informal arrangement serves most needs, easier to set up than cities
-families
-friends, neighbors
-community

II.Cities
-more daycare spaces than country
-community, industry, gov’t provided
-gov’t subsidies

Third Example: Business plan outline

What is my business idea?
– business description

What is needed to make it work?
– basic resources and costs including:
-Location
- where and why
-Premises
-description and costs involved
-Equipment
-description and costs involved
-Stock
- description and costs involved
-Promotion
-how you will introduce your business to first clients/customers
-Insurance
- description and costs involved
-Transport
- description and costs involved
-Staff
- description and costs involved
-Other
-professional services of solicitor etc and costs

Can I do it?
– personal background, skills and experience

How will it work?
– business activities and cashflow

A good outline is extremely important. If you are planning to start a business (freelance writing, electronic publishing etc) then you will need a business plan. It is crucial to operating a business. I have provided an outline above for what you should be thinking about when starting a business. However, if you really want to increase your chances of success, I highly recommend using the How to write a business plan…Made easy e-book.

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An outline is like a road map use it whenever you feel lost or off track.

Introductions

Your introduction introduces the readers to the thesis by gaining their attention. You need to state the topic and set the tone. An effective introduction generally begins broadly with an interesting statement about the topic, and then narrows to a statement of the thesis. There are many ways to introduce a topic. Which ever you decide your goal is to quickly arouse the readers mind. The key thing here is to quickly get to the point.

Some people feel that a strong intro is not important. After all you have your entire article to prove to reader that what you have to say is meaningful. Well think of your reader as a lover…
You won’t get what you want unless they are turned on and if you don’t do it in the right way they will lose interest and pull away and you’ll have to work that much harder to arouse them.
The same goes for your reader; the only difference is that you want to arouse the mind.

Here are some methods that you want to avoid:

Repeatedly using the same introductory style
: Different techniques are better suited for different topics. It is important to experiment with different introductory formats.

Filling space: I see this in a lot of articles. The author wrote an introduction just for the sake of having something on top of the page. It’s just a combination of sentences strung together to form a paragraph, they don’t really say much or entice the reader.

Ex: The holocaust is one of the greatest tragedies for the Jewish community. Many Jewish people suffered immensely because of it. Those who were affected had their lives altered forever.
It’s the same as saying…The holocaust was bad. Many bad things happened. Because of these bad things peoples lives changed.
Do you see how dull this intro looks? This is a serious topic but an intro like this does not convey that to the reader. You want your introduction to be more interesting than this.

The book report intro: This is when the author provides the reader with information that they already know. This is another type of filler. You don’t really know what to say so you result to giving the reader redundant information.

Restating the question: It can be effective but not as much as offering a more interesting introduction. Your teacher or professor will appreciate not having to read the question they wrote over and over. A little creativity goes a long way.
This also applies to when people write articles that are lists, for instance, “top ten ways to improve your writing” saying “The top ten ways to improve your writing are…” without anything prior is not an introduction.

The dictionary intro: A definition can be effective. However, these types of introductory styles are often weak. For one, your definition may not always apply to your topic. Second it is easy to use the wrong definition. If you want to use this method I suggest coming up with your own definition of the word. It will be more thought provoking for the reader.

Enough with the don't lets talk about do's.

You don’t need to write your introduction first. You may find it easier to write it after you have your body paragraphs set in place. If you’re like me, and you need to write an introduction to get the writing process started, make sure you go back to revise your introduction so that it fits with the rest of your article.

Open with an attention grabber, like I said before you need to draw the reader in.

Consider these formats.

An anecdote, story, or puzzling scenario: These types of introductions are highly effective as long as they relate back to the thesis of your paper. People relate well to stories. They either like to imagine themselves in that situation or can personally relate to the story. Retell a story or shock your audience with an analogy of the subject that you are presenting.

A quotation by a well known person or something provocative: The quotation can be from anywhere, an interview, article, book, movie or even a song, just as long as it relates back to thesis. A quote by a well known person is useful because the reader associates you with the person who said it. A quote from an intellectual makes you seem intelligent. Remember, you can not write down the quote and claim it as your own. You have to give credit to its source. Also you need a few lines to explain the quote. Don’t expect the quote it self to serve as your intro. Never end a paragraph with a quotation in any section of your article.

A rhetorical or provocative question: Questions are great. Readers love them. Pose the reader with a question and propose an answer to it in your thesis

Remember, you never get another chance to make a good first impression.

Thesis Statements

Ah, the dreaded thesis statement, it’s amazing how such a little sentence can cause big frustrations for writers. Are they important? You betcha, a thesis statement provides both the reader and the writer with a road map. It is the message that you want your readers to receive after they have read your work. It’s a complete sentence found at the end of your introduction. While you are trying to draft a thesis statement try to complete this sentence.

After reading my article my reader will understand/agree that…

You can also use a purpose statement.
The purpose of this (book/essay etc.)is to…

A strong thesis statement analyzes or interprets facts
. It doesn’t just state these facts. It provokes your reader’s mind and makes them wonder. You want to take the reader from a “so what”, to a “show me!” reaction.

You usually develop your thesis during the prewriting faze of the writing process.

There is more than one form of a thesis statement. I'll show you those in a bit along with a few examples of good and bad theisis staments.

Thesis statements fall into two categories:

  • Restricted/Aristotelian thesis statements include your supporting arguments as well as your main idea.

    Ex: Beowulf is characterized as a hero not through realistic detail but through dramatic speeches, and exaggerated descriptions of his actions in battle.
  • A non-restricted thesis leaves out the supporting arguments

    Ex: The misconception that etiquette is used to determine class may be why many people are shying away from practicing “good manners”.


I prefer restricted thesis statements because they give me an outline for my essay, making it easier and faster to write. They are especially helpful when writing exams or short compositions.

How can you tell a good thesis statement from a bad one? Well for starters a good thesis statement urges the reader to read on but most importantly it analyzes a fact. The key word here is analyze.

See if you can determine the difference between these examples.

Ex1.In his article Stanley Fish shows that we don't really have the right to free speech.

Ex2.Stanley Fish's argument that free speech exists more as a political prize than as a legal reality ignores the fact that even as a political prize it still serves the social end of creating a general cultural atmosphere of tolerance that may ultimately promote free speech in our nation just as effectively as any binding law.

Reference: http://www.english.upenn.edu/Grad/Teachweb/scthesis.html

If you said that the first example is not really a thesis statement your right, all it does is state a fact. The second one actually analyzes the fact.

Here’s another

Ex1.America’s immigration polices are complicated.

Ex2.The debate surrounding America’s immigration reforms is a complex issue; however, it is clear that topics such as free trade and exploitation are being avoided

The first example is far too broad. It would take you forever to analyze all the factors and try to prove your claim. It’s better to state both sides and then prove why one side is better. Or analyze the issue from a different perspective.

Remember your thesis is a focus. Do not make a broad or general statement. And it should stand up to criticism and scrutiny.

Write more than one thesis statement for your topic, and then go with the one that is most relevant, original and best analyzes the subject.

What’s the word of the day? Analyze!
Do this and you will always come up with a good thesis statement.

Body Paragraphs

You can have a good intro and a good thesis but you won’t have a good article/essay unless you have good strong body paragraphs to build your topic and prove your thesis.

Body paragraphs are like miniature essays. Each paragraph has a topic which is expressed in a topic sentence. I find it easier to write if my topic sentence begins at the start of the paragraph. But it can occur as a second or concluding sentence. Which ever suits your writing style is fine as long as you have one.

The rest of the paragraph explains and supports the paragraph. Use facts, arguments or examples to support or explain the topic. However, do not include anything that does not support the topic.

You’ll learn how to develop your body paragraphs in a bit.

Developing your body paragraphs

Different organization patterns may be used to develop your body paragraphs. You may choose to use narration, description, process, definition, classification, cause and effect, example, problem/solution, comparison/contrast, and analogy. Body paragraphs often combine more than one of these formats to develop the topic. When composing your body paragraphs move from generalizations to specific detail and, sometimes, back to generalizations. Avoid using sentences that remain at the same level of abstraction of the topic. In other words do not restate or declare your topic. These types of sentences are not logically convincing. They will not give you developed paragraph. Rather, focus on proving or supporting your topic.

Coherence

Coherence refers to the logical flow of ideas and sentences. I know many writers struggle with this, including myself. After all you want all your ideas to connect with one another and be understandable for the reader. Here are a couple of things you can do to help:

  • Use transitional sentences to guide your reader through their logic and to point to the direction that their arguments are leading. Transitional expressions include but are not limited to: first, therefore, however and furthermore.
  • Read your work out loud. This is the best way to see if your article flows. Read your work out loud to yourself or a friend to hear how it sounds. If it sounds wordy, choppy, or just plain ridiculous it will read that way to your reader.

Remember you can’t just throw words on a page it has to be logical in order for it to be effective.

Conclusions

Generally, conclusions invert the structure of the introduction. Begin by briefly stating the thesis and then summarize your main arguments then open out to more general statements. Your conclusion should only be a few sentences not a whole page. Avoid introducing any new ideas.


Sunday, October 08, 2006

Writing has been something I've enjoyed doing ever since I learned my abc's. Whether it's for personal reasons, a school assignment or for work, it is a very important form of communication. But as much as I enjoy writing, it terrifies me. Exposing yourself through writing is very intimidating because it is so personal. I'm always wondering whether my idea is good, how can I better orgainze my thoughts, is the formatting ok, is the message I'm trying to send being recieved and worst of all why is the competition doing so much better?


Face it, whether or not you like writing, knowing the right techniques can change your life.

  • Get better grades on your papers
  • Land your dream job/position
  • Start your own business doing what you love

Those are just a few ways in which writing well can fulfill your life.

I'm always on the prowl looking for tips and products to help me improve my skills so I can generate a profit from my passion.

Rather than letting it all out now I prefer to do a little strip tease ;)

I'll reveal more tips, products and services that will improve your writing later

For now always remember to write from the heart; stop when you're finished.